unfinished -work in progress

I had a teacher who said the first six strokes and the last six strokes on a painting are the most important. It helps to see it on the computer screen. I see a couple of little tweaks that need to be done. If you know my work you probably see a similarity between this one and Prayer for Beruit, http://vwieringa.blogspot.com/2006_07_01_vwieringa_archive.html